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Zack Goorno
01/24/2015 5:13pm
I can't imagine how hard it is to wake up that early. It sounds like it's worth it though.
Rob
01/28/2015 10:07am
People say that there is a connection between song and poetry but you really made that connection here. I like how you made it like a song because it really showed that you have mastered the ability to not only write a slam poem but to be able to make it a song. Nice job and maybe sometimes you should write a full song?
Fitz
02/02/2015 9:52am
I like the poem and the theme, though the recording feels a bit like a rough draft not a publishable piece. It is supposed to be a poem, not a rap--and there is a difference. You need to post the lyrics, too. Leave a Reply. |
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